Sunday, August 3, 2025

The Case for Nick Herbert as Leda Strike’s Killer.

 


This post is a follow-up to my earlier account of the vicious side of Nick Herbert we saw in Troubled Blood. While I am not necessarily married to the idea of Nick as the killer–if I were placing a bet, my money would still be on Grandpa Whittaker–I am going to argue that every argument our Headmaster makes for Dave Polworth, Leda-Slayerapplies as well or better to the good Dr. Nick.

Let’s look first at what we know about Nick and Strike’s friendship. Despite his nomadic childhood, there seems to have been a relative period of stability, at least in regard to the family’s physical home, from the time Strike was 16 to 18. Apart from a brief period at age 16 when he was again “dumped” in Cornwall, he seems to have lived in the same squat from roughly the time Leda took up with Whittaker, until he left for university. During this period, 14-year-old Lucy left to live in St. Mawes for good, Shanker became a regular presence in the flat, and Strike took up boxing and focused on his schoolwork, in preparation  for applying for university.

This is also the time his friendship with his comprehensive schoolmate Nick Herbert developed. Nick and Cormoran would seem to be natural allies, with both trying to escape their working-class (or, in Strike’s case, indigent) upbringings for something better. Nick was a cab driver’s son, but aspired to be a doctor, while Strike, despite his itinerant lifestyle, was smart enough to enter and excel at Oxford. Strike seemed to have a good relationship not just with Nick but with his dad, who taught him shortcuts around London. The boys were close enough by the time they were 18 to have a joint birthday party in a local pub, a fete that was apparently elaborate enough that family and friends from Cornwall attended. This was, of course, where Nick first met Ilsa, whom he dated for a year afterwards. 

Nick, therefore, would have been in a position to know what kind of hell Strike was living with in life with Whittaker. He would have presumably been as annoyed as Uncle Ted when Whittaker disrupted the party with his singing. He probably had at least some acquaintance with Shanker, who would have had no qualms about speaking, loudly, about every one of Whittaker’s excesses, even if Strike was more discreet regarding his mother’s lifestyle. But how could this have led to Nick bumping off his good mate’s mother, some two years later, when he and Strike are both university students?  Let’s look closer after the jump. 

Means and Opportunity: Medical students in the UK, unlike the US, start their course of study immediately after secondary school, usually doing two years of general studies before starting medical training. Nick, like Cormoran, would presumably been in his second year when Leda died. It is not beyond the realm of possibility that he would have already begun shadowing clinical settings and learning some medical skills. And with five medical schools in London, it is highly likely he would have been in the city, or a least closer than Cornwall.

Nick is therefore much more likely than Uncle Ted or Dave Polworth to know how to give an IV injection and what dosage of heroin would be fatal. Red Caps, after all, devote themselves to catching dealers and users, not emulating their drug administration techniques. Nick also would, from his friendship with Strike, know where the squat was, and perhaps even enough about the occupants to know when he might find Leda alone there. Finally, with his cabbie-dad’s knowledge of streets and short-cuts, he would have been better equipped than the Cornish folk to get in and out of the area quickly and undetected. 

Motive: But what would have prompted Nick to seek out his good bud’s mom and intentionally overdose her? That requires some fan-fictionesque speculation, of course, but I think my story is a little less complex than Nancarrow family incest and a joint Ted/Dave wish to see Leda snuff it. My assumptions are:

  1. Lucy, just like Cormoran, became good friends with Ilsa during the years she lived in Masham, as a result of Joan’s close friendship with Ilsa’s mother.  Ilsa may well have been a much needed big-sister figure in her life.
  2. Lucy, Ted and Joan, if not Strike, worried about young Switch’s welfare. Perhaps the baby was left with the Nancarrow family at some point, and Lucy, aged 16 or 17,  bonded with him before Leda snatched him back. Perhaps it was knowing that Leda was as unstable and negligent as ever and, worse, was now under the spell of the violent and dangerous Whittaker. The thought of spending yet another 18 years worrying about a child in Leda’s care, after finally seeing Lucy and Cormoran safely out of her clutches, could have been unbearable to Ted, Joan and Lucy. 
  3. Ilsa knew about Whittaker’s sexual abuse of Lucy, and Leda’s refusal to protect her, either because Lucy told her, or because she overheard her mother discussing the situation with Joan. She also knew of their ongoing worry for Switch’s safety. 
  4. And, what Ilsa knew, she told Nick when they were dating for that first year. 

Then, let us suppose Nick, age 20,  is interning at an inner city medical clinic, near the squat. As we saw in multiple examples in Troubled Blood, neighborhood medical personnel learn a lot about the seedier sides of their patient’s lives, but may be professionally obliged to maintain confidentiality. Perhaps Nick observes Leda seeking treatment for herself or Switch and, in the process, learns about some horrible type of abuse Whittaker is inflicting on the baby, or Leda, or both. Leda is no better at protecting little SLBW than she was Lucy. Nick knows if he tells Strike, or Shanker, they will kill Whittaker and go down for murder. For whatever reasons, as with John’s theory on the Ted/Dave conspiracy, Nick decides to take matters into his own hands, and that a mercy killing of Leda and setting up Whittaker for murder are better options than calling social services. 

Meta-Literary: I would therefore rate Nick’s means and opportunity as higher than Dave or Ted’s, and his motive as…  well, at least no more far-fetched than that for the St. Mawes Sailing Duo. But what about the third prong, the literary element, the requirement that the revelation of the killer’s identity fundamentally transform Strike’s core identity? Would the discovery that Nick killed his mother shake up Strike as much as learning that Ted or Dave dunit? I think so.

I think learning that *anyone* Strike loved and trusted murdered his mother would shake Strike to his core, but Nick might be one of the shakiest–especially if Strike learns that Nick had confided his secret to his even older friend Ilsa, once they reunited and married-with Strike as best man-in their mid-20’s*. Ilsa, as a savvy attorney, would certainly advise Nick to keep quiet about the crime, given that Leda’s death had been ruled an accidental overdose.  Nick and Ilsa are described as:

the only place where where the two halves of Cormoran’s life intersected: London and Cornwall, happily married.

They have the kind of conventional and stable life Lucy wants for her brother. Perhaps more importantly, they represent the type of middle-class, two-parent existence that was Robin’s childhood, and that he suspects, probably correctly, she will eventually want for herself. And, as we’ve seen, Cormoran has remarkable insight concerning Robin’s relationship needs. If Strike wants a life with Robin, he will have to embrace marriage, and likely, parenthood. Nick and Ilsa are the only peers Strike has with a traditional marriage that he might want to emulate, given that he is less-than-impressed with Lucy’s, Dave’s or Richard Anstis’s home lives.

In Troubled Blood, Strike learns Nick is not spending Valentine’s Day with his wife: 

There was a short silence. Strike had always considered Nick and Ilsa, a gastroenterologist and a lawyer respectively, the happiest couple he knew. Their house on Octavia Street had often been a place of refuge to him.

Robin has almost an identical reaction:

Then she remembered that it was Valentine’s Day and registered the fact that Ilsa didn’t know where her husband was. Something more than worry overtook Robin: it was fear. Nick and Ilsa were the happiest couple she knew. The five weeks she’d lived with them after leaving Matthew had restored some of Robin’s battered faith in marriage. They couldn’t split up: not Nick and Ilsa.

If Cormoran is now settling into his identity as a Cornish man and a Nancarrow, by Book 6 or 7 we should be expecting him to be reconciling that identity with his chosen life in London. By this time, he may well be  considering becoming half of “Mr. and Mrs. Cormoran Strike,” and eventual “daddy” to their children, the first of whom, I predict, will be named “Rokeby Strike.”** The news that his model couple had, for a couple of decades, conspired to keep the secret that one of them was his mother’s killer would certainly shake that identity to its foundation and could threaten both his and Robin’s vision of a successful life together. So, yes, I think this could be the type of identity-shattering event that, per Headmaster John,  is needed to complete the mystery. 

Fortunately, I have another hypothesis that may let Nick (or Ted, Joan, Lucy, Dave, or any of Strike’s loved ones) be responsible for Leda’s death, but stops short of them being full premeditated murderers. But that’s a topic for another post. 

*Ever wonder what the occasion was for Nick and Ilsa’s reunion? Presumably both were working in London, so perhaps they bumped into each other by chance in the street, in a city of 9 million people, a la Margot Bamborough and Paul Satchwell. But, it seems more likely they would have met again at some occasion involving their mutual friend Cormoran Strike. I’m thinking that they might both have been invited to his medal presentation ceremony, another major event in his life about which, so far, we have learned nothing, but which could well have happened in his mid-20’s. 

**This is the name Robin typed into the search engine in The Cuckoo’s Calling, when she decided to look up Cormoran’s paternity. I think it will reappear at the christening of their firstborn. 

Comments

  1. Means, Motive, and Meta-literary boxes all checked! I love it, Louise, especially as this possibility, which requires that both doctor and lawyer have to know about it, makes Nick and Ilsa’s inability to conceive a child something of a Medieval Morality Tale judgment or Victorian novel’s illicit-actions-have-consequences episode (see ‘Chamber of Secrets’ and ‘Casual Vacancy’ for Rowling’s love of those genres).

    I look forward to reading why you still think Jeff Whittaker’s grandfather is a better bet than Nick or Dave as well as your theory in gestation that lets the loved ones off the hook as murderers. As it stands, I think Nick Herbert, Gutsy Gastroenterologist, has to go to the front of the Likely Suspects Line in Leda’s death!

  2. In terms of (*) I’m pretty sure we already know the circumstances of Nick and Ilsa’s reunion. I can’t quite remember the whole thing, but I think there was a mention of a birthday Strike celebrated in a pub in London while his mother and Whittaker were together (may have been mentioned in Career of Evil?). The 18th, the 21st birthday? There was a mention of Whittaker crashing it and performing one of his songs, or something. And there was definitely a mention of Ilsa coming over from Cornwall to attend it, and meeting Nick after a long time, and the two of them developing a relationship.

  3. Louise Freeman says

    Elisa, That was the 18th birthday party, where Nick and Ilsa met for the first time. This would have been November 1992, presumably when Cormoran and Nick were in their last year of secondary school. They dated a year, then broke up when they went off the separate universities. They met again in their mid-20’s, after they were graduated and established professionals— so probably a minimum of 5 years later. It was mentioned that Ilsa was engaged to a fellow lawyer, and Nick dating a doctor. Obviously the spark was still there, because they both dropped their current partners and married a year later.
    The mid-20’s meeting would have been while Cormoran was at least 3-5 years into his Army career, so probably not home a lot. That’s why I think it must have been some “big event” that all three would have attended. Ilsa may have been close enough to Lucy to have been invited to her wedding, or college graduation, since they were schoolmates in St. Mawes and Joan was close to her mother, but Nick probably would not have been. Cormoran dislikes parties, so probably would not have wanted Joan and Ted to throw him one just for coming home on leave. That’s why I’m thinking the medal ceremony might be a good candidate.

  4. Oooh, I see! Got confused there… which would mean that, in this scenario, Nick would be killing Leda Strike *before* he reestablishes a relationship with Ilsa. Doesn’t make the scenario any less likely or anything, however in my mind a scenario where Nick kills Leda as a result of information obtained from Ilsa is somewhat stronger if Ilsa is in Nick’s life (although presumably unaware of what he’s up to!) at that point. But maybe it isn’t necessary.

  5. Interesting theory, and I enjoyed reading your arguments in favor of it, but I hope you won’t be offended if beg to disagree. I can’t really see Nick taking that kind of risk even if he did have the motivation. But then I also can’t really see any of those close friends and relatives doing the deed (especially Shanker; if he were going to kill anybody it would be Whitaker). Nor do I think that Nick and Ilsa met again at the medal ceremony, because I think if they had been there they would know what he was awarded his medal for, and if they knew that, I think they would’ve told Robin that when she lived with them. and finally, I can’t imagine that Strike and Robin would ever name their child Rokeby Strike considering how resistant Strike has been to even meeting with Rokeby, let alone to him not wanting to connect the famous name with his own. I know that it’s very possible that now that Strike and Pru are communicating that Strike might soften his attitude towards his father, but I still don’t think that he would name a child for him.

Troubled Blood: The Dark Sides to Two Old Mates

 


One of the most notable moments of Troubled Blood was when Strike acknowledged Robin as his “best mate.” Up until that moment, Robin had assumed that title belonged to Dave Polworth; other readers might have assumed it was Nick Herbert. By the end of Troubled Blood, however, both men have shown their darker sides. It is easy to see why Robin has been promoted to best bud as well as detective partner.

Don’t get me wrong, I appreciate Dave’s service in this book. His assistance to Joan, Ted, Strike and Lucy was admirable, He provided physical help– everything from home repairs to taking them food in the flood to, most importantly, leading the team that escorted Lucy and Strike through the floodwaters so they could be at Joan’s deathbed. And, he gave Strike and Ted emotional support, through his pub invitations, serving as a pallbearer and his presence at the scattering of Joan’s ashes. He is a loyal friend, through and through. 

But, like Strike, he’s a bit of a jerk at times. His hyper-nationalism, to to point of wanting to restrict the purchase of property in Cornwall to those who can prove ancestry, is off-putting, even to Strike. He’ll win no awards as either Husband- or Father -of-the-Year. He’s an excessively permissive parent, allowing his girls to run wild, even at a funeral wake. He had no qualms about quitting his job and uprooting his family, without even the decency to consult his wife about the plan first. And, in his opening scene in the book, he laid his misogynistic streak bare for the world to see, acknowledging that he saw marriage, first and foremost, as a cheap and convenient path to regular sex. All in all, despite his service to the Nancarrows, I found myself liking this version of Dave Polworth less than I did the guy who made several icy dives in search of Liz Tassel’s typewriter. 

But, there’s another “old mate” of Strike’s who goes down several notches for me in Troubled Blood: his London schoolmate and man of the always-free-spare-room, Nick Herbert.  I’ll tell you why after the jump. 

Up until now, Nick has been a pretty cool character. He and Ilsa are a happily married, and professionally successful couple, their joy marred only by the pain of infertility. They open their home to Strike whenever he needs a place to stay, and extend that hospitality to Robin after she walks out on the Flobberworm. He also has been useful on at least one case; both his dad’s cab and his dad’s knowledge of London short-cuts came in handy in The Silkworm, and, though this is less clear, Nick may well have been the first to examine the fecal evidence Robin collected from Beau the elderly Doberman, and confirm the presence of intestinal tissue.  Note the explanation Strike gave for calling him as he’s hatching the plot to catch the killer:

“No choice. Al, ” Strike muttered, pulling out his mobile again. “And Nick.”

“Who’s Nick?” asked Robin, desperately trying to keep up. 

“He’s married to Leonora’s lawyer,” said Strike, punching buttons on his phone. “Old mate… he’s a gastroenterologist…”

Strike made of point of stating Nick’s profession, implying that it was relevant to the help he needed. He didn’t say, “His dad’s a cabbie.” If Nick really did poke through dog poo to find his professional tissue of interest, that was above and beyond the call of duty, almost as much as Dave’s typewriter-diving. 

But, Nick took a major fall from grace with me with his reaction to Ilsa’s miscarriage. I get that grief can have effects on people and make them behave in ways that they would not otherwise. But Ilsa was in just as much emotional pain as he was, on top of the physical trauma she had experienced from losing her baby in a public restroom, with only a kind stranger to assist her. She was probably still in considerable physical pain when Nick launched his cruel verbal attack.

We have to assume the miscarriage happened the day before Robin learned about it, given the timing of Nick’s call to Strike on the morning of Valentine’s Day. If Ilsa had not been to the emergency room the evening afterwards, she would have needed to see a doctor the next day, and for Nick to be drinking with Strike all day instead of checking on his wife’s welfare was reprehensible. 

Even worse was his blaming Ilsa for the miscarriage. As a medical doctor, Nick, of all people, should know the facts about miscarriage. Which are:

  • The most common cause of early (<13 week) miscarriage is chromosomal defect. About half of miscarriages occur for this reason.
  • Other common reasons include hormonal imbalance, infection or an overly strong immune reaction by the mother. 
  • Miscarriages at this stage of pregnancy are not caused by the mother’s physical activity, be it work or exercise. 
  • There is no known way to prevent early miscarriage, either before or after it starts. 

For any man to tell his wife she is at fault for a miscarriage is despicable, and doubly so if the husband is a trained physician. In short, I don’t blame Ilsa one bit for throwing Nick out, and think he should consider himself fortunate she let him back the next day. 

Finally, we get little evidence he had any true remorse for his actions. Judging from Ilsa’s text to Robin, he seems to have at least begun their reconciliation not just drunk, but with a not-apology of “I didn’t mean it the way you took it,” as if the words “It’s all your fault” and “You didn’t put the baby first.” are going to somehow be misunderstood by a woman who may well still be bleeding.

This is certainly a side of Dr. Herbert that we’ve never seen before. Their marriage seemed to survive the crises, but I think there has likely been permanent damage. While I certainly hope they will achieve their dream of parenthood, whether through adoption or a medical miracle, I think it will be an uphill climb for them to work their way back to the happy couple we knew before. 

Given the ugly sides we saw of both Dave and Nick, it does not surprise me that Robin is now, officially. Strike’s “best mate.” The question remains, will she ever be more?

In my follow-up post, I will make the case that Nick’s cruelty to Ilsa was not his first savage act, by outlining the case for him as the killer of Leda Strike. 

Comments

  1. What a closing sentence! Perhaps the Best Ever at HogwartsProfessor…

    I look forward to learning the case against the Despicable Doc!

    John, delighted

Wednesday, July 30, 2025

While We’re Waiting for The Ink Black Heart, Try Magpie Murders: a Book-within-Book Echo of The Silkworm

 

Thanks to my fellow Strikefans on Twitter, I got a good recommendation for another British whodunnit to tide me over until The Ink Black Heart comes out. Indeed, it is particularly appropriate since we are expecting a book-within-a-book (or possibly cartoon script within a book?) mystery, with connections to The Silkworm. I am about halfway through the audiobook of Anthony Horowitz’s Magpie Murders, volume one of his Susan Ryeland series.

I can already testify that there are a lot of similarities between Magpie Murders and the second Strike volume, so much so that, were they not published so close together (The Silkworm in June 2016, Magpie Murders in October 2016), I might think that Horowitz’s volume was inspired by, or written in homage to, Robert Galbraith’s.  In fact, Rowling’s name has been mentioned twice in the book, along with other well-known mystery writers such as Ian Rankin, P.D. James and, of course, Agatha Christie.

Susan Ryeland is the fiction editor of a small British publisher. The company’s star writer is Alan Conway, an egotistical author of a best-selling series of Christiesque mysteries, who has just submitted his planned final manuscript, having decided to bump off the series star, Detective Atticus Pünd, via brain tumor. When misfortune befalls the author, his editor turns detective, searching not only for the missing last chapter of the manuscript (which contains the annoyingly absent whodunnit solution) but also for answers as to what really became of its author.

Like Cormoran and Robin in The Silkworm, Ms. Ryeland recognizes real-life acquaintances of Conway in the manuscript, and begins to suspect that there is a hidden message in the book that someone didn’t want published for the world to read. Other common elements with The Silkworm include a self-important author with more enemies than friends, a sphincter-clenchingly bad, unpublishable book draft that said author thinks is his masterpiece, a country retreat in Devon, an abandoned wife and child, anda manuscript that appears to exist only on paper, in an era of computers. And if we want a connection to Cuckoo’s Calling, we have the famous person falls from a tall building, suicide or murder question. The major difference is that we readers get to read the full Atticus Pünd mystery along with the editor. Don’t worry, it’s better than Bombyx Mori. 

It’s been a thoroughly entertaining read so far, and I’m on my library’s waiting list for the sequel, Moonflower Murders. If you enjoy a book-within-a-book and British murder mysteries, this is one to put on your list. And is the magpie on the cover of The Ink Black Heart a wink to this series? We’ll have to wait and see.

Comments

  1. Great find, Louise! This book was chosen as the ‘Best Book of 2017 by Amazon, NPR, the Washington Post, and Esquire and I have never heard of it. I found a $4 copy (including S&H) at Bookfinders.com which means the world was flooded with copies five years ago. Very much looking forward to reading this — and very grateful to you for the recommendation!

  2. cool

  3. Dr. Freeman,

    Thanks for the interesting find. As well as sounding like a decent thriller in its own right, one thing the Horowitz volume should help remind us all about is that with this next book, serious readers should probably look forward to some of the best features of Rowling’s books.

    In practice, that means a return of the metafictional/metaliterary commentary that we first got a look at in “Silkworm”. This is really a softball prediction, yet I think with “Ink Black Heart”, we can expect another text featuring the author’s thoughts on reading, writing, authors, and readers all mashed together again. If the particular medium for this is a digital, online comic series, then it will be interesting to here what Rowling, a traditional paper and ink bound writer from all accounts, thinks about this new level of writing media, and how it might impact the way readers interacts with the stories they enjoy.

    Thanks again for the book recommendation. It’s even more interesting to know there’s an entire Detective series based around the “Silkworm” model.

Tuesday, July 29, 2025

Who’s Getting Through All the Annabel’s?


I do almost all of my reading for pleasure by audiobook these days, to make use of my 60 minute commute every workday. As such, I think I have heard the Cormoran Strike series more often than I’ve read then.

In general, I’m a fan of audiobooks. After all, as story-tellers, humans have been telling and listening to stories much longer than they’ve read them. And when you have a narrator as good as Robert Glennister, who can show us Yanks a bit about what the regional accents in the U.K. sound like, it makes for a great production.

But there is an occasional glitch. On my last listen through The Cuckoo’s Calling, I got a surprise from this passage, which I have reproduced below, with the original spacing.

The telephone rang. Robin picked up the receiver. To Strike’s surprise, she immediately affected a very stilted Australian accent.

“Oy’m sorry, shiz not here…Naoh…Naoh…I dunnaoh where sheiz…Naoh…My nem’s Annabel…”

Strike laughed quietly. Robin threw him a look of mock anguish. After nearly a minute of strangled Australian, she hung up.

“Temporary Solutions,” she said.

“I’m getting through a lot of Annabels. That one sounded more South African than Australian.”

“Now I want to hear what happened to you yesterday,” said Robin, unable to conceal her impatience any longer. “Did you meet Bryony Radford and Ciara Porter?”

Strike told her everything that had happened, omitting only the aftermath of his excursion to Evan Duffield’s flat.

I had always assumed, reading the text, that the line in bold above was said by Strike. This is one of the first times we see him explicitly teasing her, for her rather lame efforts to impersonate a fictional temp every time her former agency calls. Apparently, she does not do international accents well. 

But, Glennister reads this line in Robin’s voice, making it sound like Robin is the one doing a little self-deprecating humor. A minor difference, to be sure, but as we see the relationship between Strike and Robin grow closer, the teasing is a sign of a increasing comfort and familiarity. Strike intends to convey that, given Robin’s inability to do consistent or believable accents, Temporary Solutions was going to conclude he was “getting through” multiple secretaries weekly, all of different nationalities, and all (what a coincidence!) named Annabel.

To my surprise, most of the people in the read-along group seemed to agree with Glennister that it was Robin’s line, and therefore that she was the one “getting through” a variety of Annabel personas. But, to me, not only is it funnier as Strike’s line, but the line break after “‘Temporary Solutions,’ she said.” indicates that the speaker has changed. If Robin had continued to speak, there should be no line break, just like there is none between “longer.” and “‘Did…'”.

So, am I crazy to think this was a narrator’s error here?

Oh, well. At least he wasn’t calling her “Isla.”

Comments

  1. Agree 100%. I always thought that was Strike’s line, and I think it’s funnier if it is.

  2. It’s got to be Strike’s line – as well as reading better that way, Robin wouldn’t be ‘getting through’ a lot of temps, only an employer could be doing that.
    100% agree!

  3. I thought it was Robin’s line although I think I read Cukoo just once before I listened to the audio book, so maybe the audio book corrupted me. It is funnier as Strike’s words.

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